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The pain of suffering,
the feeling of loss.
The person is near,
but will not speak.

The wound still fresh,
the pain is too great.
The person has spoken,
but will not go on.

The end is near,
the pain almost gone.
Their presence has passed,
but the memory remains.

The endeavor is over,
the memory forgotten.
Time stands still,
as the world starts to crumble.
©2004-2010 ~sblood95
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This is kind of a depressing poem...about pain, loss, and suffering. I dont know how i came up with this one.

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:icondan-l-james:
I feel that way mostr of the time. My life even falls into the music of Simple Plan.

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I have left.

Goodbye friends. I will see you in the future.
:iconceresgurl:
This was depressing, but in a good kind of way if there is a good kind of way o be depressed lol. ^_^ But the peice is written well and beautiful at that.

Ceres

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Your my dying flower, petals of a broken soul falling all around me-The Demon Ororon
:iconsblood95:
thank you. i have alot of stuff to post, but no time. i will definetly be posting stuff when school is out.

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The ultimate answer to life, the universe, and everything is 42. What the ultimate question that should precede this great answer, nobody knows.
:iconceresgurl:
Well that is good to know!

Ceres

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Your my dying flower, petals of a broken soul falling all around me-The Demon Ororon
:iconaloneprodigy:
that was insane.... i love this peice its very expressive and depressing

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You are weak... The reason you are so weak is because u didnt hate me enough... Who says that?
lmao
:iconhadesechidna:
Wow...that is deep...

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*ch33z4h01ic w411f10w3r*
:iconsblood95:
yea...depressed people can be that way sometimes...(ok..maybe not depressed, maybe just bored)

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The ultimate answer to life, the universe, and everything is 42. What the ultimate question that should precede this great answer, nobody knows.

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